Monday, January 10, 2011

A Day Of Despair Comments

Rating: 4.6

Being alone as always,
This pain is consuming me,
No one to care for me,
In this empty world alone.
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Sam S.Slait
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Kelsey Phillips 03 February 2012

i love this poem so much emotion i really like it

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Adeline Foster 01 February 2012

Everyone needs to purge themselves of such deep loneliness. Now it is time to give us some words of encouragement. Be inspired, read mine - Sudbury ON Canada - Adeline

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Vipins Puthooran 09 December 2011

Emotional poem/portrait'd in an elegant style! !

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 11 November 2011

wow that was amazing i was just i dont have words for u have a great talent and a graeat voice u made this a poem by feeling and meaning it was breath taking and i just loved it like no other

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Emily Angel 22 July 2011

I can't describe how beautiful and true this poem seems to be.... I experience it day by day...Good work! ! ! Kudos to your skill! ! !

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Romeo Della Valle 27 June 2011

A well penned and poignant write full of imagery! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Zainab Nashe 05 April 2011

That is exactly what i'm afraid to fine myself in. And I hope I will not. I feel sorry for u.

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Leas Celyn 12 February 2011

i too have felt this way more often than not. even though it hurts, i appreciate u writing the truth...

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Trevor Tang 11 February 2011

i like it. Really. I can fully feel ur loneliness and depressing. u are just being dumped into a black room and just cry and cry, but no 1 cares. Emotional, Depressing. Like it.

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Neko Girl 07 February 2011

wow this poem is really deep are you emo because i used to be

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Natasha Kirke 06 February 2011

Wow. This poem is very depressing. You really seem to be affected by lonliness and you put it across very well in your poem. I congratulate you on that. Anyway apart from that, I hope that you will not be lonely anymore. No one should feel like this.

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Okay you seem that you wrote this poem when you felt lonely after you have been betrayed by friends so you feeling that you want to be dead as soon as possible. Am i right in my interpretation? But any way it is a good one and i loved the title

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