Being alone as always,
This pain is consuming me,
No one to care for me,
In this empty world alone.
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Everyone needs to purge themselves of such deep loneliness. Now it is time to give us some words of encouragement. Be inspired, read mine - Sudbury ON Canada - Adeline
wow that was amazing i was just i dont have words for u have a great talent and a graeat voice u made this a poem by feeling and meaning it was breath taking and i just loved it like no other
I can't describe how beautiful and true this poem seems to be.... I experience it day by day...Good work! ! ! Kudos to your skill! ! !
A well penned and poignant write full of imagery! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...
That is exactly what i'm afraid to fine myself in. And I hope I will not. I feel sorry for u.
i too have felt this way more often than not. even though it hurts, i appreciate u writing the truth...
i like it. Really. I can fully feel ur loneliness and depressing. u are just being dumped into a black room and just cry and cry, but no 1 cares. Emotional, Depressing. Like it.
Wow. This poem is very depressing. You really seem to be affected by lonliness and you put it across very well in your poem. I congratulate you on that. Anyway apart from that, I hope that you will not be lonely anymore. No one should feel like this.
Okay you seem that you wrote this poem when you felt lonely after you have been betrayed by friends so you feeling that you want to be dead as soon as possible. Am i right in my interpretation? But any way it is a good one and i loved the title
i love this poem so much emotion i really like it