Monday, January 21, 2013

A Day Of Despair Comments

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I took a day off
To lie in my despair
I took a day off from pretending
To dwell on the fact that life
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Patricia Grantham 21 February 2013

Tiger Lily: What a real feel poem, We have all felt that way one way or the other. Most appreciated.

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Alla Simone 22 January 2013

I took a day off from pretending To dwell on the fact that life Really isn't fair It's easy to feel like it takes too much energy to be positive about a negative situation or circumstance. Because there really wasn't anything Anyone could say to make me feel okay This is my favorite line though. Very relatable.

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