Wednesday, January 23, 2008

`a Day In The Life Of An In-Between Comments

Rating: 5.0

24jan08.

Today is yet another monday:
can't wait for four o'clock.
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Tiffanie Lein
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Ershad Mazumder 16 July 2008

Excellant expression of mind. I liked it.I shall make time to read more.Thanks Tiffanie

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Tiffanie, This was a clever, well-written verse. I loved this stanza, because it is so real. Put on my pleated skirt But i'd have to cross my legs. Would rather be in shorts and shirt, Makes me feel so neg. And yes, Shakespeare makes me a little bit hot. He had so much talent. Who reading him, wouldn't feel the call to write poetry. Love your work, L&T

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