A Day In The Life Of A Child Comments

So simply put and and lovely to read.

Sweet piece. Reminds me of my own when infants.Thanks

The last four lines are enough. You have rightly hit it. We can also experience the sleep.

Simplicity and honesty in your tone makes this a wonderful read... Thanks. Deva

near perfection in its simplicity M lady

A precious little poem, inspired methinks by old nursery rhymes. Love the rhythm, the simplicity of the language and the beat of the piece. Yes, a lovely children's poem for grownups to enjoy. (or vice versa if you like?) love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Hello Fay and that was just about picture perfect, I felt as if I was watching the little one through out. Great read! Loyd

! The most wonderful aroma in this world, is the smell of a baby in a fathers arms, till they need changing of corse!

I like the simplicity of yjis one, just like the life of a child.

divine. best word i can use. fay, you have a wonderful way with words.

Several thngs jumped out at me while reading this entertaining and extremely well written poem, Fay. First, I noticed how tersely it was written, using a minimum of words to convey such vivid impressions. I also noted how smoothly it was written and that every word flowed into the next word perfectly. I was quickly aware of how accurate and expressive your words were as well. All of this points to the fact that you are a most talented and experienced poet and certainly a great pleasure to read. Carl.

another beutiful write sir...while reading i was imaginig my naphew who's 2ys now...thanks...10

beautiful, i was grinning like a baby...you've made me wanna have a baby now! ! !

awwww this is suchhh a sweeeet poem...very very well written..i love the style..youve done it so well without overdoing anything....the love and tenderness shine through.delightful! ..a 10..by a mother..! : >

I was fortunate enough to work shifts when my children were babies So enjoyed it all inclding changing dirty nappia You portray it well in a few words