Tuesday, December 29, 2009

A Day In Sky.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh! Dear pilot,
take me higher,
higher up in the sky
I want to fly,
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seemakhera (Aanamika 805)
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Afzal Shauq 03 May 2010

really a sweet and rich poem..meaningful too..enjoyed it..wel done 10/10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 31 December 2009

Nice simple poem, flows like a sweet dream. May your wish come true. Keep it high, aanamika...Naseer

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you wrote it with a childlike enthusiasm.. sweet poem

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Joseph Poewhit 29 December 2009

Funny how many people want to fly like the birds.

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Nikunj Sharma 29 December 2009

Can I be the pilot? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? nice poem, full of expression and genuine feelings. simple words depicting the thought process well...................nice work

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 December 2009

very nice write here! ......

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