Thursday, July 30, 2009

A Day In August Comments

Rating: 3.5

Today the rays of the sun lost its radiance
It flew away with the summer birds to kinder climes
The breeze no longer warmed, instead, an alien cold
Brought in by the August rain hung clammily in the air
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COMMENTS
G. Murdock 01 August 2009

What a marvelous sketch you've created here. True artistry as a painter can only create. Thank you for sharing this great poem.

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Catrina Heart 31 July 2009

WOW you are so fast my friend...still few hours to go before August first yet here is your wonderful poem about the month...well done! ! !

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Eddie Roa

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