A Day For The Lord Comments

A very touchy dialogue between God and son….yeah if we can think we’re singing by God’s voice box, walking by his legs, working by His hand…then the flood of grace descends …a very nice poem …like solace the we’re no less by just reversing the mindset of our action we can be near God. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

An excellent theme said in elegant verses. Having been born in this world, everybody has a purpose here to fulfill. God has given us all the faculties for our own rescue, wit and wisdom. God has been kind that way. It is upto us to use these tools- body, mind, thought, intelligence- in a diligent manner for a better living. Otherwise, these tools are enough for our death. Atomic explosion in an atomic pile would give us energy for various useful purposes. The same explosion over Nagazaki can also exterminate the entire humanity. This is the truth.

very very wonderful....it is long but descriptive and worth reading for..it is so touching...everything is there..very complete...the beauty of His creations, His love for mankind that He specially created....reational beings......thanks sir for creating this piece...which brought teardrops along with your lines... and reflect...i really love sir this...A+10++++

'Keep this world of paradise, Spreading the message of love, As beautiful as an abode of peace, That's the best way for you to serve.' the poet at the end of his long descriptive beautiful narration gives this valuable message to mankind...good composition 10

Maam ekam saranam vraja!

A day brightner indeed! As I read your inspiring poem, I thought of the verse from the Psalms that exhorts everthing that has breath to praise the Lord. Wonderful, Rajaram. Warmest regards, Sandra

a fantastic work.u must be spiritually inclined however your writing is orthodox.but still u xpress your ideas and those of God.Awsome

Its absolutely great sir I felt the lord speaking to me.....

In a world which forces most of us into depression and assumed complexity, it is amazing how you keep your simplicity overlaying a profound philosophy of love of God towards universe and all its creatures.

We are all instruments of the Lord, and i liked how you put how the man was to work for the Lord, not God give the man pleasure, because we are all made to live our lives for Him. It is beautiful! !

Rajaram, this ia s wonderful poem, beautiful and spiritual. Thank you for sharing it, it is indseed worthy of much praise. Regards, Lucy

Rajaram-This is indeed one of the most beautiful and masterfully written works I have ever read. Such wonderful imagery, truth and beauty radiate from this poem. Your true inner beauty shine throughout it.