A Day For Myself Comments

A wonderful poem. I have given it 5 stars already and will add it to my favorite poem list. Well done!

Until 'next time'...... bri : ) And I read this is an English translation of one of your Odia poems, right? ;)

(cont.) This truly is a gem (a rare, precious one) of a poem. I voted before (PH tells me) and it MUST have been *****. To my favorites today.

Bharari, I'm glad I found this poem again this month (I was here in May also, though I don't recall the poem well at all) . (cont.)

I've left comments before today, including the year this was submitted. Here: 'I will ask the clouds To lend its black' I'd use 'clouds..their' or 'cloud...its', not 'clouds..its'. : )

Strange it is that several people have said comments recently take a long time to show up on a poem's page, but mine from 5 min. ago already is showing below!

some favorite lines: 'colors from butterfly wings to adorn my face and beautify my being.' Hey! I'd do the same (maybe not) . bri : )

Nayak, I love this poem. I wish you stopped on 'But leave only a day for me'. Thanks for the elaboration though.

4 stars bri : )

Bharati, if I had only ONE day for myself, I'd NOT want it to be my last! ! I'd have it a lot earlier in my life so I could look back on it anytime I wanted to, for fond memories (I hope) . bri ;)

Yes, I've commented before now. I'm short on time now. I.E. I've got other things to do shortly; doesn't everyone? I still like this, still would give some suggestions, and STILL want at least TWO days to 'myself' (each week) . ;) bri

It's 'too bad'/unfortunate that I can not read this in Odia. Of course few people can speak more that 6 or 7 languages; I speak 47 languages.

yes, yes, YES! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this is what poetry is all about! ! ! ! ! Girlfriend, this is the most beautiful poem I have read in many a year, thank you for sharing it with us, it blesses our day with its unique and stunning vision. top score and favorited

Such Sabbaths are sacred!

I will collect pollens from flowers..I love the delicacy of poetic expression. A magnificent poem dear poetess. Stay always happy and blessed!

Where have I been that I'm reading this poem now? Wow! What a write. Thanks for this wonderful contribution to poetry.

I came for re-re today. After reading this evaluation of Late Daniel Brick, I feel so sad that he is no more with us to enrich our site and favour each of us with his smiling words

Marvelous poem! With all the lovely, delicate expressions simply one of your best. Congratulations!

My heartfelt thanks to all the revered poets, critics and friends who love to read my poem and put their inspiring comments on the poem.

This poem truly deserves all applause and honours.