Saturday, September 24, 2016

A Day Dreamer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Frustration is my worst enemy,
when I think it can kill me now anytime,
I attack it before it attacks me,
I have a deadly weapon,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Indira Renganathan 30 November 2017

You tell that woman who woke you up that you are indeed a great poet and that you have every right to dream be it night or day and imagine a lot....congratulations Akhtar... poets like you only can write this kind of amazingly amusing poems...thank you

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Valsa George 04 October 2016

Visualization is a powerful weapon to fight against frustration! Visualize not how you are but how you should be! Really enjoyed this poem.... your naughty and mischievous spirit is well reflected here.....! Of course you are a great poet... I always feel that poems are at your finger tip!

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M Asim Nehal 30 September 2016

This this poem is an eternal joy to read. You have given life to dream through this wonderful poem. We all do the same things in our lives, we all want to do something great so that at least we are remembered if not for ever at least for a decade or the next generation. The best way to take out our hidden wishes.10+++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 September 2016

Wonderfully written! Frustration is truly a killer! Hats off! Akhtar Sahab, you are great!

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Spock The Vegan 24 September 2016

As in one James Bond movie: You only live twice, one for yourself and one for your dreams. Keep dreaming.

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Kelly Kurt 24 September 2016

Through dreams, we can lead multiple lives. Through your poetry, I get to experience yet another.

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