A Day Dream Comments

ouch...this is some deep passion here...does the girl know? If she doesn't I think it's time to tell her.

A day dream, methinks, born of some experience? But lovely nonetheless. Interesting too, they way you've set out the poem, with a distinctive punctuation style - that serves I to believe, to create a slightly stilted delivery from the narrator who is so overcome with emotion that he must 'feel' for his words. A romantic read. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

nice poem.really a day of dream.

Thin, lovely and romantic poems which does not require comments... Sincerely, Tsira

Beautiful wistful write James, romantic and touching, 10 Lynda xxx