Sitting on a balcony
over looking the city
gray lifeless, out to sea
the first rays of light.
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very nice imagination. the description is done so beautifully and it truly deserves to be THE POEM OF THE DAY congratulations - Roy Storey
I like your descriptions - they really catch the feeling, a little like 'The fog comes in on little cat feet..', but I forgot who wrote it..
What a lovely word painting, Roy! I liked this poem very much. Kindest regards, Sandra
Good masha allah it is narrated in good way