A Day At The Beach Comments

Outrageously funny all the way but cleverly and creatively written. Great write! ! ! !

My husband is so not interested in poetry - but I think even he will appreciate this one! I love rhyme as well. Another of my addictions (all fairly harmless I hasten to add) .

well arn't those lovely bathing suits...lol....its their fault if they call you a creepy old man...they need to put clothes on.....but you enjoyed it...idk...nice

I could not stifle the laugh out loud. Thank you so much for this little treasure!

Your Rhymes remind me of Georgie Podgie - You make me, No, everyone have a good laugh. I really feel very much that I am not good at makingup rhymes! A jolly nice poem.

Well done why not? will you be uploading that? Had a good giggle, I like a bit of happy injected into my day Thank you.... Enjoy this coming summer- Cindy