Saturday, September 1, 2012

A Day At Camp Randall Comments

Rating: 4.5

Heading towards regent street
Fans roaming the street
Hitting all the bars, way to many cars
Red & white every where
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Michael Peterson
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Bri Edwards 16 November 2012

michael, i like this. i like the effect of using a lot of partial sentences. it keeps the action lively. thanks for sharing. bri

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