the ice plant,
slowly unfolds
with the first morning rays.
myraid shades of pink,
...
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Many plants and insects only live for a day and menage to fulfil their purpose in life. Sweet poem.
Simple words, yet so meaningful. I love the way you express yourself.
Lovely, life is just a fleeting moment, but it is a time to live our dreams.
A poem covering the entirity of life. Well done. A mosquito has only nine days life. A butterfly has only a month. If we start reflecting from such angles, man would definitely become more pious and lovable to his fellow beings. We need poems like this to enable us to reflect on totality of life. Good work.
it is a lyric poem with descriptive language in a color theme..There are 4 words; ice plant, bees and alifetime, which are the frame for this poem...10++
How wonderful....you catch the nature to capture the reader10
Another beauty, Ritty.... I am getting to know you: -) Ruthie