Monday, December 30, 2013

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The man who has ransacked,
My heart with a whip of the eyelash,
Gone and hid from the scene of passion crime,
Leaving the heartless human hauntingly alone,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Dave Walker 31 December 2013

To work so hard then to have to sell for next to nothing must be heart breaking. A great poem.

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Njuguna Peter Mnyagia 30 December 2013

I love the amazing twist in the first six lines. your description of the tragedy excited me. I would love to write something like this. beautiful

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