Wednesday, January 30, 2019

A Dawn Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

I had heard you come here to kiss the first ray of the sun
Nimble footed on the green carpet of the grass you walk
And from your deep eyes you look at the remaining fun
I listen to music, do you sing or with someone you talk?
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 28 March 2019

Welcome the dawn of love, a beautiful poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 January 2019

you sir love sunrise and its dawn I love still love my first love DAWN when as a lover I was reborn my love for her has not yet gone forlorn How I wish a poet like you JA No 1sir I too was born pray I am reborn

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 January 2019

I am just like you! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 30 January 2019

Indeed a dawn of love, nicely worded.

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Khalida Bano Ali 30 January 2019

An amazing poem on love of God and nature.

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Kostas Lagos 30 January 2019

Beautiful poem Akhtar! Incredible use of words!

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Prabir Gayen 30 January 2019

Very fantastic poem ❤ ❤ ❤ dear master...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 January 2019

I listen to the voices of flying kisses from the soft garnets/I feel everyone has become a thief look at the white flowers/With Perfumes of hairs the wind blows turn in the clarinets/Birds still in their nests, but twittering tales of unseen showers..magnificent poetic expression where romantic urge has been fascinatingly expressed...10

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