Friday, February 21, 2020

A Dawn Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

The night was old
The night was cold
A low hanging crescent moon
And the bright morning star
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Ruta Mohapatra
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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 February 2020

A well composed wonderful poem.......10++++

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Ruta Mohapatra 27 February 2020

Thank you, Bernard! Have been reading your acrostic poems sometimes.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 February 2020

I scanned the grey sky/For a second bright moon/Searching for Betelgeuse/Preparing to die/With a fiery light show.....sparkling expression....just beautiful! A wonderful work.......10+++

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Ruta Mohapatra 27 February 2020

Thank you, Dillip! Have been reading your short poems.

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