A Dawn Gathering Comments

I have often told a lover, or a loved one, from whom I was separated, it is the same moon we share, though apart...it helped to keep them closer in heart...knowing we both stood beneath it's shared shine. Thanks for the reminder. PEACE

Not sure what Morgan's talking about. :) I read it as a haikku on Heavenly bodies. They always have to be neat, compact and very precise. This one fits the bill exactly.. Well done Sir!

I read this poems a lot of time.... what i can say is.... bring her to your arms....so fast that she can not ask WHY? As woman always say in a inappropriate moment.... Just do it Poet....