A Daughter's Gratitude To A Loving Mother Comments

swatimalya, thank you for this accessible poem on subjects noble and most important. i enjoyed reading it. -glen kappy

Your love, care and concern are my treasures Which precipitate a coating around...................... and i carry touch of divine wing by sway and i move learning to learn yet unknown love of touch by lofty petals mellows aplomb soul serenades by bloom of marigold breeze yet splashes over shadow of love i see the moon of wishes wades across journey pain mills through path of journey ahead i smear rungs of colors on skin of innocence passion sets up the heart to rain in vain as i live and love in vale of tunes beyond and within stance yet appeals what i need to know i do remember songs of soliloquy iridescent as reminiscence cries by falling of snowflakes

a very touching poem..its god's cruelty to bond and then seperate...i have lost both dad and mom...after getting used to their care and affection it is very difficult..whether they come as daughters and eventually mother us..we are never going to know...

like daughter like mother.both compliment each other. lovely and touching poem. voted10 surya

An interesting application of human bonds and chemical technology....But the mother's love is beyond scientific metaphors....But your sentiments shines through anyways... Cheers. Subroto

Dear Swatimalya, Your poem is much better and cool as well your ideas are vast and the way you write is smart and good so keep in writing please Well done here Luwi

excellent poem, wonderful feelings......10++++

a powerful tribute to the most influential person in anyone's life....heartfelt and soul stirring

Swatyimalya, this is a sweet and sincere tribute to mothers. My mother is no more for over a decade now but I still derive most of my inspiration from her. I liked your work especially the clarity and flow.

wow a sincere and true love from a loving daughter to a loving mother -10 anjali (do read mine My mother)

'Births' and ' Rebirths' not known to us Whether those are true But if they appear over and over Shall always pray for a mother like you...... mothers are unviersal... even i want my mother back in same way//// but beautiful desire on the part of daughter. so deep love for mother....10 read mine to refresh your mother'O, mothr' and comment.. donot forget your papa too. read as papa do u know and papa you too... i would lie if u comment onthose critically if you so desire...

A beautiful, touching tribute about the mother and daughter bond. Very well expressed. Thank you for sharing :)

But the law of eternity Will not allow this pair of electrons To remain in a bond............. .love of mother yet transcendent by eternity clone yet remembers as when anchored by genesis, , , , , , , , , , most passionate yet ingenious write by the deep feeling for mother, as mother`s grace always winks in us all along till last dregs of our breath on this mortal dusts, wonderful blazing the glory of mother by teary reminiscence as time makes apart tearing the chord, yet poignant reeling all through her cloned blood, a best tribute by gratitude as ever,10++++++++++++++++, thanks for sharing

Love this beautiful poem with my small 10.

I wish I had written this. A beautiful, personalised tribute. t x