Monday, March 10, 2008

A Daughter Deflowered Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Scene: a dark basement in the shadow of night
where dirty, perverted things are done out of sight.
His stealthy, secret visits are furtively made
by the torch of his eyes and the tip of his spade.
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Linda Marie Van Tassell
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Julia Luber 06 September 2019

I have never read such a good poem as this about this difficult and disturbing subject. Incredible.

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Jette Blackstone 23 December 2017

Disturbing subject that is well expressed and that brings out the shame, deception, and treason in rape and incest and neglect. Thanks for sharing.

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Sheila Rowell 24 April 2008

The title has a powerful hidden message in it and this piece is absolutely awesome. Many individuals, male and female, has experienced this type of event as sick as it is. Outstanding performance.

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Bryan Taplits 17 March 2008

This is a beautiful poem (despite the horror of its subject) . It portrays not only what was done (in a lovely graven meter) , but also the way the narrator feels-and perhaps-remembers it. It's quite amazing: Neither the 'he' nor the 'she' of the poem are labeled, but both are unforgettably described. This poem is both subtle and brazen-an admirable accomplishment.-Bryan Taplits

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Linda Marie Van Tassell

Linda Marie Van Tassell

Lynchburg, Virginia
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