Tuesday, June 17, 2008

A Date With You Comments

Rating: 5.0

You ask me: what I expect
Well! It is just a ‘date'.
While the abetting inky night
is writing down a tasteful menu,
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Sathya Narayana
COMMENTS
Queeny Gona 25 August 2013

An amazing write uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem and I am sure my aunt would felt the same of your youthful date.

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Queeny Gona 25 August 2013

This is really an amazing date uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem. Beautiful piece of your musings. Enjoyed the read and I am sure you would also like and enjoy my poem ' A date with a fool'

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Gayle Anne Goff 22 April 2009

YOU ASKED ME TO GIVE YOU MY COMMENT ON YOUR POEM I DID IN MY LAST COMMENT I GAVE YOU A TEN PLUS TOLD YOU I WAS GLAD YOU MADE THE TO 500. LIKED THIS POEM

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Gayle Anne Goff 20 April 2009

GLAD YOU MADE THE TOP 500 GREAT POEM YOU GET A 10

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Michaela Tatualla 08 January 2009

Nice write! Keep it up!

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 January 2009

very romantic write...pictures a very romantic venue....words are amazing with depth....lovely way to treat a lady on a date...this shows Sir Sathya's versatility... ...10+++++

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Neha Aradhye 02 December 2008

so sweet.. Your vocab is just great...

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 17 November 2008

a perfect date...and wonderful usage of words... :)

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Seema Aarella 18 October 2008

A perfect date...a dream date! Its complete with the fervour of consenting hearts!

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Reshma Ramesh 18 September 2008

wonderful...........makes me want to date again...........10 for you

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Indira Babbellapati 16 September 2008

wonder if i can ever indulge in such sheer poetry!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

10 for this lovely piece.

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Shalini Kts 03 September 2008

a pure date with passionate love...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2008

....compact composition where loves passions thoughts are hugging each other. ++++10

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Booklover Tv Lounger 24 August 2008

Truly a joy to read. It showers you with pure emotion and passion. What more could a person want from a love poem. Excellent!

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Mamta Agarwal 23 August 2008

a passionate poem, full of imagery, that holds interest till the end. great Sathya10+

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Kiran Raza 09 August 2008

this poem has everything, I am blown away If I said one thing about how awesome this poem was, I wouldn't be able to stop myself from saying how much I love it A 10

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Rema Prasanna 05 August 2008

passionate wire.. expressed well.. amazing images...10 Rema

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Ronald Stroman 24 July 2008

very well illustrated.............................................. take care.

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, aryaindia 21 July 2008

Your poem shines in its own light of clairavoyance and the expectations and more becoming and blooming as your thoughts reveal. Fantastic imagery that appeals. Thanks, arya.

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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