You ask me: what I expect
Well! It is just a ‘date'.
While the abetting inky night
is writing down a tasteful menu,
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This is really an amazing date uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem. Beautiful piece of your musings. Enjoyed the read and I am sure you would also like and enjoy my poem ' A date with a fool'
YOU ASKED ME TO GIVE YOU MY COMMENT ON YOUR POEM I DID IN MY LAST COMMENT I GAVE YOU A TEN PLUS TOLD YOU I WAS GLAD YOU MADE THE TO 500. LIKED THIS POEM
very romantic write...pictures a very romantic venue....words are amazing with depth....lovely way to treat a lady on a date...this shows Sir Sathya's versatility... ...10+++++
A perfect date...a dream date! Its complete with the fervour of consenting hearts!
wonderful...........makes me want to date again...........10 for you
....compact composition where loves passions thoughts are hugging each other. ++++10
Truly a joy to read. It showers you with pure emotion and passion. What more could a person want from a love poem. Excellent!
a passionate poem, full of imagery, that holds interest till the end. great Sathya10+
this poem has everything, I am blown away If I said one thing about how awesome this poem was, I wouldn't be able to stop myself from saying how much I love it A 10
very well illustrated.............................................. take care.
Your poem shines in its own light of clairavoyance and the expectations and more becoming and blooming as your thoughts reveal. Fantastic imagery that appeals. Thanks, arya.
An amazing write uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem and I am sure my aunt would felt the same of your youthful date.