Monday, August 8, 2016

A Date With Daddy. Comments

Rating: 4.9

Daughter like wine you have grown to be my fine girl
You have grown wings to enable you patch on the tallest branch
You are now a woman; daughter remember?
Under my wings you no longer hide
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Aisha Masha 15 December 2016

Very well written. I like this poem because it shows how parents don't speak in direct words to their children. Real life situations depicted here.

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Ruth Nyokabi 10 September 2016

Oh the love for daddy to Daughter then comes the society pressure on bachelors and bachelorettes. Daddys demand and daughter not in concurrence good piece here.A must read for all people who make other persons business theirs.

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James Mwenda 30 August 2016

Good piece for daddy.i like the innocent responses from daughter

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Jane Biashara 29 August 2016

hahhahhahaah my mum should read this! arume tii atano nyakwe ngakwona ung'ora ng'oretie tuguru njirene nabo

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Rose Kanana 29 August 2016

Trust parents with such care! ! ! !

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Collins Waswa 25 August 2016

Oh! Daddy's love. You have crafted so well the unsolicited society expectations....all parents should read this and learn how to handle their children

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Rose Kanana 29 August 2016

Its the world of others against an individuals life

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Charity Karimi 14 August 2016

A desire from me.Wish this could be passed out there.You never cease to amaze me excellent.

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Eliza Mwendwa 09 August 2016

He he he he, My Mum n Dad should read this, , , ,

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 08 August 2016

Daddy comes by killo newton force, he cannot wait anymore, I love the way you replied saying, But daddy, you told me babies are bought I have shopped in all the big and small malls What i see are breathless beautiful dolls I am still transfixed to your response... Where do babies come from daddy? Are they still bought in malls to date? - you remind myself of older days, where babies were bought!

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 August 2016

Roll your eyes with affection! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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