Monday, August 19, 2013
“a Date With A Fool” Comments
Rating: ★3.5
Racing cars went wiz-zing by
On arcade of main square
Zig zag path of mine
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Sathyanarayana M V S
26 August 2013
Very funny Queeny...especially so many rhyming words...you have certainly changed your way and trying new things in your poems; new expression, new style and some Yankee colloquialism...good. But check on your grammar here and there.. with love.
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7/26/2025 7:33:26 PM # 1.0.0
a good poem Queeny. very witty and funny. good job