Saturday, January 20, 2018

A Dart On A Target Comments

Rating: 5.0

Not a hummingbird but learning how to dance
Pelt me some, that would not be the last
I'm unbreakable and not made of glass
Never quibble on a mild squabble
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Doris Cornago
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Doris Cornago 11 March 2018

Heartily dedicated to a man who made my heart dance on a whim of completing my task with 3 titles in his belt aside from clearing the task sheet with subtle maneuvers of a born dancer - majestic! Thank you, Murtaza Ghazi. :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 January 2018

Such an interesting write.....10+++++

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Doris Cornago 20 January 2018

Yes. Poets are like hummingbirds. Thank you for affirming.: -)

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