Monday, January 14, 2013

A Darker Eye Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the top to the bottom of the spine
It sent chills, a darker figure then I
His rise my fall, a take over as I crossed the line
Consumed by hatred fear strikes the dome the eye
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Heather Wilson 25 January 2013

So heartfelt, Dear angel tell father I`m sorry.., just lovely, many choices we make in life we can never return to, although we can try to make amends, a 10 in my book.

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Lyn Paul 17 January 2013

Moving write. Thankyou. A healthy 10 I rated yesterday.

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Kelvin Owusu

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