Friday, May 13, 2011

A Dark Sunny Day Comments

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My sun is here
Now its time to shine.
You gave me something to live for
I thought you were all mine
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Anthony Zeigler
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Aditi Khandelwal 01 March 2012

Really the title of your poem is really catchy and nice... pretty good write but do shoot yourself with the bullet of happiness... Aditi

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 August 2011

Very well written poem..nice lines

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Aqeb Benazir 29 August 2011

I like the Ironic title! ! this deserves to be a hit song.

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