A Dark Side Comments

Another great write, I have been on the dark side numerous times both in life and writing. The key is can you climb out and balance it with a good side. Love your choice of words and it just flows.10+

I'm drawn to the originality of this poem and I relate strongly to it since I've lived on both sides of that same equator. Very nice poem indeed.10/10

Nice one mate..absolutely beautifull

The sudden switch from dark tales to all great light tales is splendidly done. Great work

Nice write, I like the contrast of dark and light. Really enjoyed reading this work. Kevin

Most of us have both a dark and a light side. But like God is light and Satan is darkness we must always take the side of God and light. A very good poem, I really enjoyed. Lynn

We a; ; have a dark side and a light side the trick is to keep them in balance

even u had a dark side but ur heart like a something glow...Thay's why she asked u! : p such a star dancing in the dark!

A feeling of movement from the shadows into light emerges. Nice. ___Baru Gobira

A dark side..a sense of being there to long, wanting to break the mould into light. A thought provoking poem! ; D

A powerful write, I feel inspired! Great job!

I enjoyed reading, something I can relate to, and very well written