A Dark Shadow Comments

A bit jumpy because, I think, English is not the poets' first language. I lime the contrasts and imagery throughout that melds the vision of a Dream with the deep emotions involved while in the labyrinth especially Like...My hope and despair playing, Where is the labyrinth hill? .... All in all very effective depiction of sorrow working its way throughout the labyrinthine Courses of the mind's eye when in deepest sorrow transforming from grief.

a dark shadow walks on bright sun...lovely line...like it

Suffering with heavy rain is beautifully explained. Thank you.

your cyclone of thought, I like it. thanks.