A Dark Moon Rising Comments

Very thought provoking write. So much is pulled in here. A sad ness for current life and a longing to go back to old ways. Loved the write.

Beautiful poem with indepth meaning. Only way forward is looking past backward. Very true. Loved reading it.

what a perfect piece of art. in few words our today's world is defined.... really, who will save this world, who will stay in front of that black moon? nice one.

In the darkness we can go back and reflect on our mistakes and be determined to change for the good of mankind. Beautiful write!

Nice write. Sometimes it wise to retreat to refresh.

very good write, dark moon.

I agree. Nothing can be done (by man) to save the world. Perhaps, we need to re-read events, hence a moving backward to be able to inch forward. Thanks for sharing your poem.

Connection with nature like our ancestors did to restore the ecosystem. very meaningful

Hi Dave wonderful poem great read i hope we can save the world

Wisdom is born out of the past, and it is wisdom perhaps that will save the world. Excellent Dave.

Looking back may indeed help us find a better tomorrow, wisdom does often come from mistakes made...and remembered.

Yes, it has been an anomaly of the Industrial Age, which is eradicating the world at an astonishing rate! If we go backwards, and change the future that can be done with lessening our carbon signature almost completely (it won't happen,) the end of the world is imminent and threatening very shortly.

a very logical thought. the only way forward is backwards

Only way forward is backwards. Nice advise when disaster strike. Beautifully said. Thank you.