A Dark Clouds Comments

Soon dark clouds may disappear I may have no more fatigue to wear It is time to wipe out the tears High hopes with good wishes to hear.. it is sign of down fall...10

'Life can’t be shaped at the point of gun' { only who can understand beyond their need or fear can accept the karma, cycle of destiny and no body can force or make it happen without The Almighty permission} i really apprecieted your poem as it is at it's own class and it's for human to think more than what they see. Thanks

very well constructed.................................................. take care.