Monday, June 2, 2008

A Dark And Stormy Night Comments

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A dark and stormy night each one is the same I'm crying in an empty room calling out your name. A light shines through a window an image of your face I start walking towards you but soon the image fades. raindrops beating downward poisoned red with blood bang against the ground a symbol of our love. lightning strikes the sky I scream of desperate fear I'm yelling for your help but you're no longer there. In the corner of the room In the middle of the storm Is a flame of burning fire
I built to keep me warm. but the fire is a memory burning through my eyes I try to put it out but memories do not die. I'm searching for a door
But there's no way to escape When again near the window
An image of your face. My eyes close tight As I 'm reaching out to you
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Colm Hayes 02 June 2008

Spooky, well writen. You should check out my poem The Shadow Man, any way nice job.

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Allen gill

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