A Dare Comments

A splendid write Marvin! ! Great read, true love IS worth any sacrifices! ! *10*! ! ! Thanks for sharing! ! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

There is power in love, a power in togetherness that transcends mere quantification.

To 'dare' to be bold, to be true, to be different. What a strong, courageous poem. I read this line as suggestive of a relationship between mixed races or cultures: 'Yet so far we can not have freedom To savor the colors of our love divine' But whatever the subjects of your piece, you have written it with great passion and a love of language. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

A lovely poem Marvin, two people working in unity to make a go of life together, well-penned by you, Lynda xx

Yay to and for a man up to the challenge! t x