Tuesday, September 4, 2012

A Dare Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dare dream brings to my destiny
an uninvited guest!
This is not at all a tale of mystery,
but a factual history.
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Shihabudheen K J
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Edward Kofi Louis 28 October 2016

Waveless! Thanks for sharing.

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Sarojini Pattayat 13 February 2013

Very nice poem.Keep on writing. With each writing you will develop. Best wishes

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Barbara Nixon 05 January 2013

Excellent piece of writing, great imagery and beautifully written

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Lynn Monet 06 December 2012

Hmmmm.... The woman of the poets dream resembles the perfect image of his own mother.... The perfection of its beauty and the never ending devotion of unconditional love.... Anything less than what he envisioned is unacceptable.... Nonetheless when we do dream we aim for the biggest and brightest star....

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Sallam Yassin 03 December 2012

Great work for great love it's rain of love and garden of rose

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Jaya Mishra 11 November 2012

**sighs** 10.... Juss for the word mother.....! ! ! Every thing about this piece....ur destiny, ur tale of mystery, the factual history, all the facebook walls..... They support you all. This was beautiful... Best tribute to mother. **excuse me plz now.... M running to narrate it to my mother** Keep writing n presenting works like this...

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Shihabudheen K J 08 November 2012

appreciate your valued comments all readers and fellow friends

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Roong S 25 October 2012

Oh that's beautiful :)

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Neela Nath Das 12 September 2012

Very nice poem. A great tribute to Mother.

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Darkangel Flyfree 10 September 2012

This is a very good poem, enjoyed it very much! Your mother most be very proud of you Shihabudheen! You always do have some inspirational poems to share with the world! Keep it up my friend!

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Shihabudheen K J 09 September 2012

@romeo: you made one of the greatest comments i ever got.delighted my day too.god bless you

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Shihabudheen K J 09 September 2012

Happy to know you all are listening to my words.its greatest feeling ever.

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Romeo Della Valle 09 September 2012

WELCOME TO THE POETRY WORLD! We are all proud of having with us such a talented writer like you in the Poetry World! Your love and touching feelings filtered through this amazing write give you away! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City

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Valsa George 07 September 2012

Just amazing! ! Great write! Enjoyed every line of it! !

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Marie-chantal Tuyisabe 05 September 2012

A little bit long, but interesting. Great choice of words. Keep it up

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Young but talented as you are, your poem has right blends to keep one reading the other ones.

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Poetheart Morgan 04 September 2012

Shihabudheen K J, its so beautiful and detailed the love that you nourish for your mother! Unusual and full of love! ! ! Great.

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