A dare dream brings to my destiny
an uninvited guest!
This is not at all a tale of mystery,
but a factual history.
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Very nice poem.Keep on writing. With each writing you will develop. Best wishes
Excellent piece of writing, great imagery and beautifully written
Hmmmm.... The woman of the poets dream resembles the perfect image of his own mother.... The perfection of its beauty and the never ending devotion of unconditional love.... Anything less than what he envisioned is unacceptable.... Nonetheless when we do dream we aim for the biggest and brightest star....
Great work for great love it's rain of love and garden of rose
**sighs** 10.... Juss for the word mother.....! ! ! Every thing about this piece....ur destiny, ur tale of mystery, the factual history, all the facebook walls..... They support you all. This was beautiful... Best tribute to mother. **excuse me plz now.... M running to narrate it to my mother** Keep writing n presenting works like this...
appreciate your valued comments all readers and fellow friends
This is a very good poem, enjoyed it very much! Your mother most be very proud of you Shihabudheen! You always do have some inspirational poems to share with the world! Keep it up my friend!
@romeo: you made one of the greatest comments i ever got.delighted my day too.god bless you
Happy to know you all are listening to my words.its greatest feeling ever.
WELCOME TO THE POETRY WORLD! We are all proud of having with us such a talented writer like you in the Poetry World! Your love and touching feelings filtered through this amazing write give you away! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City
A little bit long, but interesting. Great choice of words. Keep it up
Young but talented as you are, your poem has right blends to keep one reading the other ones.
Shihabudheen K J, its so beautiful and detailed the love that you nourish for your mother! Unusual and full of love! ! ! Great.
Waveless! Thanks for sharing.