sitting on a train,
returning from the home of pain,
there she sat,
as she turned the final page,
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Hey, it's OK to look, just don't touch. We may be married, but we are not dead! Good poem that more of us could relate to than would like to admit. Linda
That's a really nice poem! I like how it talks about meeting someone while you already have somebody, that happens a lot now-a-days. -Marly
your right Tai chi Italy, chance enounters are everywhere, not sure of your point, do agree know that last few lines where naff, eyes are heavy and mind tired. regards Vince
Vincent, chance encounters are everywhere. The final line was a bit naf I'm afraid. hence 8 from me. All the best Tai
a great piecs of poetry