Monday, November 7, 2005

A Dangerous Encounter Comments

Rating: 4.5

sitting on a train,
returning from the home of pain,
there she sat,
as she turned the final page,
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Adrija Dey 09 June 2006

a great piecs of poetry

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Linda Ori 13 April 2006

Hey, it's OK to look, just don't touch. We may be married, but we are not dead! Good poem that more of us could relate to than would like to admit. Linda

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Marly Little 30 November 2005

That's a really nice poem! I like how it talks about meeting someone while you already have somebody, that happens a lot now-a-days. -Marly

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Not Long Left 07 November 2005

your right Tai chi Italy, chance enounters are everywhere, not sure of your point, do agree know that last few lines where naff, eyes are heavy and mind tired. regards Vince

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***** ********* 07 November 2005

Vincent, chance encounters are everywhere. The final line was a bit naf I'm afraid. hence 8 from me. All the best Tai

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