Tuesday, July 17, 2007

A Danger To Myself Or Others... Comments

Rating: 2.8

My therapist is an astrologer,
with whom I have discussed the
merits of disbelief in free will.
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John Kipling Lewis
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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

2. Poems work on images; there aren't any here. It's middling prose with line breaks. The idea could work, but it needs a different execution.

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John Kipling Lewis

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