Tuesday, July 23, 2013

A Dancing Puppet! Comments

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Why to keep on smiling
When my heart is bleeding.
All my hard work went into drain.
Dancing on others tune went in vain.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Valsa George 01 November 2014

In this crooked world, to be very straight forward can often invite trouble! We have to be shrewd like serpents! If we are too simple, others will make us dance to their tune! Life teaches us many hard lessons! Great write Geetha!

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Akhtar Jawad 21 August 2014

Most of the politicians are dancing puppets at the hands of capitalists who finance them for their personal interests.

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Ken E Hall 31 March 2014

Life at times is not always a bowl of cherries as the poem rings out inner strength the only weapon why can't all the world be like my puppy and so loving...is it a dream... thanks for the insight...regards

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R.j. Wynn 24 July 2013

You know you are so right but when it comes to money it is painful.

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Kevin Halls 23 July 2013

We've all been through this Geetha being used by someone. Sometimes we are open and truthful and this can lead to getting hurt. Good poem on being used like a Puppet! Thanks for your comment to my poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar

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