Tides like the constant flow and ebb of the uncertainty of living,
Seize the day,
Allow God's gift of giving
To fulfill your day from the glory of the morning,
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Lovely dedicational piece Rachel showing great sadness and huge thanksgiving for your Mum. This one tugged hard on the heart strings!
A heart-warming tribute to the most-loved person in our lives, the one that gave us life. The beauty of your poem reflects the uniqueness of their relation: child - mother.
Heart touching poem comes from heart Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Very lovely and heart touching work, specially the very beginning part! well done!
Great imagery, nice flow, and like a dancer's grace this poem reached heart..........Heartfelt poem...Loved it..10+++
Like nature's sweet lullaby, Singing like the wind blowing through the trees, The beauty of your elegance was set free, To wrap your arms around your kingdom. i liked these lines. AT the end the positive note. you give. you faced all the uncertainties of life with dignity like the grace of the dancers movements. thank you you teach us to face the difficulties of life through your poem. thank you again tony
You faced the uncertainties with diginity Like a dancer's grace This is how one has to face life and its uncertainties, though often it requires mammoth levels of self control and discipline! A great read!
Dance of loving conversations of an affectionate mother has been painted in beautiful colors. A very impressive poem.......................10
Beautiful memoriam, lovely tribute, and euphoric celebration of a mum. Lovely poem, elegantly penned from the heart with conviction. Lovely poem that warms heart of the reader. Thanks for sharing Hazel.