A Dancer Comments

This is one of my favourites, Akhtar. You remind that the best poet is one who can tame language and then make it dance!

writers who lack in imagination and originality should read your poems...what a wonderful creativity you have! ! ..interesting and amusing poem...thank you very much

Very true Akhtar vai You being a poet believe and depend on your scripts, She being a dancer catapults With her jerks and flips. Language is regional or sectoral whether dance form is universal Result, she wins with her jerks and flips! !

AMazinggggg really..10 on 10

This is so very imaginative as many of your poems are! she writes universal poems, I am in a cage, she is on stage, she is a lovely dancer! ......................Wonderful conclusion! !

Enjoyable and attractive poem having thrilling expression. Thanks for sharing....10

A wonderful poem on a dancer! Loved it. Full.....10

The poetry of female beauty is read aloud and universal. But as Mohammed has stated, transitory. A picture or movie may transport it, to some degree, into the future, but skillfully written poems, like those of Akhtar Jawad, will endure in their full glory for as long as man exists

Couldn't agree with Mohammed more, I just want to repeat that this is a lovely poem. Thank you

An amazing poem..............................................

And her dance is for some moments but your poems are for ever and ever with the readers to read and enjoy......With age she will fade but your poems will pick up with the passage of time....To me moments of stage is ok but long live the poet who is at the back stage.........Loved it, nicely written poem..100 on 10.