A Dance With You Comments

i really really like this.. hahaha.... fascinating.. amusing.... entertaining... hehe... very nice write...^_^

nicely done... that's an understatement. it captivated me and like lorena, i'm very interested with who inspired you to write this. nevertheless, it was majestically done and made my imagination run.: D haha... keep writing danzen.

very well written...simple yet meaningful. all the best

it's amazing how you make simple ideas bloom into a great poem.. keep writing Dan

Im curious about the person who inspired you to do this.. You have really pulled through a great emotional poem.. You really are a much better poet and writer than I am, my friend..

this poem, though decent showed a lot of emotions... you're really great... i hope sooner or later, others will notice that too... =)

A poem of pleasantries! Good rhythm and nice read. Thanks for sharing.