Wednesday, February 11, 2009

A Dance Of Rain Comments

Rating: ★4.5

“Outside, the wind flows as the river
Arrows shoot down, drawn from the quiver
Colliding with them, missing by chance
Their bodies spin in the endless dance”
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Peter Hans
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Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ 26 June 2010

Awesome poem! A thread of intimacy woven into the write! A dance of rain and love! Well done; D

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Phumudzo Mapila 03 June 2010

Absolutely beautiful writting.Thumbs up on this one Peter H.

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Poetic Soul 22 May 2010

Well-written...very creative

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