A Dance... Comments

it's beautiful and it invites to joiiin the dance....

very very beautiful................

Lovely written. From your words a beautiful mental picture is formed.10/10

Lovely poem. Sensual and romantic. I could see the couple dancing as I read. I am especially fond of the final stanza. Great imagery throughout. Well done.

A splendid dance that commemorates the beauty of your style and fragrance of your thoughts in an eclectic manner. Just beautiful. Arya.

Exuberantly bewitching & challenging invitation to taking one long evasive glimpse into the quivering climaxing of human tandem life at its most unique point of polarity - two soles melting over! Great poetry!

visally rich................like a great painting.

A most refreshing romantic dessert

A dance, delightful; a dance, graceful and beautiful; the verse and words danced too, in perfect rhythm..!

Simply lovely to read, to feel, to experience! What imagery and such romance. Just wonderful, Hemakumar! I loved, loved, loved it! Julie

so beautifully fluid...lovely.

Magical, spellbinding. I love it and the ending was perfect. (10 from me) .

Beautiful. I will read all of your work...

As usual, a lovely luminous visual image, with the added movement of the dance - diaphanous veils, exotic colours... beautiful

Stunning........................

Lyricism at its finest. May this dance last forever. Beautiful write. Always your friend, Sandra

Flowing and imaginitive, swimming in splendour.

Its indeed. a wonderful display of a rhythmic dance of a beautifully written poetry. Thanks for sharing this one brother. best wishes, melvin

Lovely piece of poetry, so beautifully woven with gorgeous words. A delight. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

'...her eyes turned magically His earnest longing for her gradually overflowed...' - You have caught this instant perfectly well, Gallantly, 'Bravo'... Hemakumar...Thank you for sharing. Tsira