Friday, May 12, 2006

A Dance Comments

Rating: 3.9

Could I ask you to dance, madam?
Let’s go to dance to this music.
You mustn’t be a lonely woman
When everything is so rhythmic.
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Jolanta Gradowicz
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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 September 2008

...a fine composition indeed...........10

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Janri Gogeshvili 24 April 2008

Beautifully. The reader feels a dance rhythm. Palpation of hearts also cannot remain lonely … in any way...

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Hazem Al Jaber 16 May 2007

lovely write.. sure you can ask whomever you want to do whatever you feel.. done well done.. yours hazem

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Marvin Brato 11 October 2006

Beautiful poem madam, I enjoyed it. Keep it up. Indeed you deserved 10.

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