Sunday, May 12, 2013

A Dance Comments

Rating: 4.2

The wind of hopes
Breaks into a storm
Upheaval, tumultuous
And over turns the dreams
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Abdul Wahab
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Geetha Jayakumar 15 October 2014

Beautiful Poem. Very true said in few lines.. feast of failure On the uneven floor A flagrant display Of vulgar dance of life Combination of all makes the dance of life itself painful.... Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Soulful Heart 15 October 2014

dance of life on the uneven floor along stormy winds.....sometimes u r caught in the tumult...sometimes thrown away.....feast of hopelesnness......yet i feel somewhere hope cojours some path unknown.....poetically fantastic

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

Imagery nice poem good it is your hood...yeap

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 May 2013

nice poem with imagery and..... India's political ruin

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Yasmin Khan 13 May 2013

A symbolic composition with a tinge of pessimism...no hope for someone to tread on the road.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 May 2013

feast of failure, good write, thanks.

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