We shall never be happy and trustworthy
If we live on somebody’s grace and mercy
That will kill our inner conscience and strength
It will prove counter productive and lout of length
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can we make peace with disturbed mind? ? ? i just loved it. sure many unanmswered question lying in life.
HASMUKH - An interesting poem dealing mans feelings and responses. V 1 We all need inner grace and mercy and (V2) inner peace. (V3) There is an emphasis on Friends - (V4) movng together and working together as one. (V5) Why is there alwys mistrust? (V6) to overcome this we must stay positive and learn to forgive and forget past differences. (V7) Power prevails. The answer to the questions in V8 is NO NO NO NO. (V9) To revails we must have inner peace and inner frredom. (V10) saints prevail because they draw their power form the Spiritual Dimension. 'May God give them the courage and divine power without any pause'. Thank you for sharing. Yours in Poetry - JOHN.
great topic and beautiful penmanship.the deal is peace is fleeting, so are leaves.what will become of me?
We shall never be happy and trustworthy If we live on somebody’s grace and mercy That will kill our inner conscience and strength It will prove counter productive and lout of length.......fine contribution by lama..10 great fighter n thinker