Saturday, September 10, 2016

A Daily Joy Comments

Rating: 5.0

For Liza

Half of what I tell you is
unnecessary. So why do I feel
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Daniel Brick
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Cigeng Zhang 18 September 2016

body and soul, into some altered state of being, just ignore all of my blather, and surrender to that visitant energy. I'll never be in an elsewhere that has no trace of you! ............ I liked this part. Wonderful verse, nice and sincere.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 September 2016

Is there perhaps another invisible world that penetrates ours, and leaves behind in our passive minds things of ultimate importance in that other dimension? Great, a thought provoking question. Thanks for sharing it.10++ for it.

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Liza Sudina 10 September 2016

I love you. for this poem.

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Daniel Brick 10 September 2016

Thank you, Liza, with all my heart. This is the best possible response to this poem I wrote while Blues Music thundered through the restaurant and college kids noisily celebrated the first week of the new asademic year. As you see, my thoughts were with you.

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