A Dagger Comments

words were but very very powerful..keep it up

Dear Aladdin's wonderful Lamp! Yes as said by you love is dagger and I am adding it for you my soul-mate is also a candle - may be it is burning your heart! But for life time, it give you light my dear African Dove......... A dagger of Jacqui is powerful poem against her soul-mate. Is it for harry or me. Just to make you smile ha! ha! ha! :) :) :)

clever....said much in few words. -SG xo

But thy enchant'n glance like a lance Will be piercing into my green soul, , Though thou shalt see my love again In the flow of blood from my wounds thou gift'd me to live in thy world! ! ! ! For you Jacquilene- top marks! ! !

short and bittersweet indeed! ..good write J,

Very powerful for so few words. A great poem.