Sunday, November 19, 2006

A Dabbling Thought Comments

Rating: 5.0

A perplexing labyrinth of understanding drift through my head,
So elusive I can never quite paint their shapes,
Thoughts induced by light that roam into the late night,
Mere illusion cast against the caves wall,
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Sebastian Sandok
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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 August 2008

...thoughtfull expression indeed........10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 March 2008

the thought of a wise guy..............keep it up

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 November 2006

Dabbling thought &illusion does not a Poemnecessarily make...But it does here...Stellar imagework...Th' decorum, here, smacks of Dreamscape, & both it's disturbance & wonderment.Pristine structure, prevailing here, providing th' Reader w/a smooth mellifluous read...Fine overall craftsmanship, Sebastian''''''''''''''''''''''''F J R

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