A Dab Of Cheese Comments

A good poem capturing a beauty of the nature.................................................a good write...........

Rule for a nice vacation. No computers, no TV, no cell phone. May be the cell phone is precious than gold these days, it can be allowed. I love your observations on moon, clouds and whole nature. Even in this great solitude, when someone touches your heart, the whole nature shines.

But, your messages They blink upon My cellphone screen And brighten up My sky like the moon Luminous, diffused light Chasing away my gloom A dab of cheese On the cheek of a cloud! Lovely and unique images. Beautiful poem, Angelina. Best Wishes Naseer

solitude..... soul lit of doing nothing...............

and you thoughts brighten me up, your call electrify me. very nice poem. voted 10 surya