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I like what you are trying to say, though I do not agree. I wish you'd dropp the obvious rhymes though.

Sir Ivor Hogg each line is fine All confusion rituals entwine. Priests made king represent God Gave him the powerful ruling rod. All religions of rituals be shorn Let humanity true religion adorn. CP

Wow! I am a big fan of your writing already! Great lyrical flow, cleverly crafted poem! I agree with you on all points! I believe in God and I pray, but I do not believe in organized religions...they are simply big businesses. Fab job on this one, Ivor. Anna

A perfect poem from perfect Hogg...............Yeah too got angry at priest when he felt that they were selling the God.................Good Write

The rhyming is perfect and balanced, and it's not rhyming for the sake of rhyming. For what it. A difficult subject well portrayed by one cynic to another Best Regards Steve

i liked the rhyme......it sounds perfect

Religion may be so, But christianity It not, that is why this Love of mine, sources only from God's own sacred heart. You form as always is perfect

a sonorous poem with the message aptly delivered

Brilliance in composition as always Ivor...great rhymes and rhythm of words....an ageless poem for its perfection...10+++

I came across this at a PERFECT TIME in my life! Hv ditched religion n cant begin 2 describe hw grateful i am tht sum1 said exactly the words i can not pen nor say! ! Mr Hogg this is so well penned and the message is delivered outstandingly! word

I couldn't have said it better myself!