A Cursive Tale Of Existance Comments

Life, an unending poem... Could you please take a look at ' Inspiration'? Thanks.

Veery enjoyable to read. Do I detect a bit of humor in that last line? I like a lot of things but will just refer to the first stanza: With a storyless book (A wonderful way to describe it.) As a prologue to the world And cared And nurtured Then groomed in a pram (I like the rhythm of the way this reads.)

a life long tail from begining to end. to live on to eternity through a pen.

its very interesting and worth reading...thanks

Excellent poem. Congratulations.

Dr. Sameer, Storyless book, it is and we ought to fill it up with our life events. Yes, like Sandra said, we write our own epitaph, each elapsed moment is not elapsed thoroughly, it is being replaced by another. I liked the second last paragraph especially, when your lines suggested ' We come up to our conclusion with the help of experiences gained '. This poem of yours reminds me of William Shakespeare's Sonnet 18, similar concept, for we could be remembered in lines that have been written, He wrote about immortalizing the beauty of his beloved and you wrote on the journey of life...Keep up your good work, I really liked it...Well done...You've got talent! Lots of best wishes, K.Poornima

when Sandra speaks, wojja listens hoping Ameer does to, she is a wonderful poet and mentor, methinks Ameer writes in similar tones.....

It is true that we are writing our own epitaph. Beautifully written, Sameer. You have a way with words. A quality write from a quality poet. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

very true....very elegant one... significant write...on the true essence of our existence an awakening piece.... you have written words to reflect on... thanks for sharing.....10++++ _maia_

very truly and wonderfully you have depicted the tale of life and existence.................very well written..........

Wonderful write! well done.

The life cycle well depicted..........when we leave the world we should leave the memorable and adorable epitaph...........Good Write...........